ARE YOU SAYING IM FAT? IM NOT FAT! I'm just... Poofy. No one has seen my real face.. I am very mysterious, Anyway, they look good, you should try doing the line thickness on those doodles and see what you can do with them maybe add random twirling bits from it Also theres a good method to learn how to shade textures well that you should give a go and upload. Print off a picture and split it up into squares (put a 1.5 cm grid on it or something) and then do the same lightly on a piece of paper, then you take it ONE BOX at a time and copy it as much as you can. Its important to do it bit by bit cause otherwise you start to assume the shape of it and the textures go wrong and blah blah, oh oh oh and, if you're copying an image like that, try copying the image upside down, and youll find it actually looks better a lot of the time (specially when doing faces) because your brain kind of, assumes, shapes it knows like the body and the face, so when you turn it upside down your brain doesn't recognize it so you're actually copying whats there and not what you think is there ;v SCIENCE!