Hey, I'm writing a book (I have to, since I fail at every other work so I'm hoping I can get my money with this). What do you guys think about the scenario that it's somehow gonna be like? Story: It starts with a girl called Daisy Cinnamon (I'll think of a name more original later), coming home from school. She's really sad that everyone around her only cares about living the same life, having a good job, having much friends and living like 'they should live'. Since she is the only one that lives her life 'out of society', she doesn't have any friends. She dreams about a school or a place where everyone is more individual, more unique. Wonderfully, she learns that such a place might exist, called "Colour Island". To get there though, one must have enough fantasy, otherwise it's impossible to go there. Therefore, there's almost nothing known about Colour Island in humans society, that's why a lot of people think the island is a lie anyway. Daisy decides to go there. She passes the test and the way opens. ---- While there, the area seems very different from home. But the people are all humans like her, so she isn't really convinced yet that they will be unique. When they arrive at the school, she doesn't immediately feel at home yet and she starts wondering if this was such a good idea. By the way the school is located on a seperated little island floating in the sky, it's only accessible by a vehicle shaped like the half of a ball. As the days go by, she starts to really like it there. But there is one bad point. The leaders of the school are like dictators. When you misbehave, you get a warning. 3 of those warnings means being thrown in jail (jails are under the school). When she learns about this, she gets very scared, but notices that many students do everything to please the leaders, even by snitching on others. Because if the leaders like them enough, they get a chance to become a leader as well. --- Well, blabla, a lot of stuff happens, and eventually Daisy gets thrown in jail. Forever. Since there is no government on Colour Island, no one fights the dictatorship. Luckily, she met someone who is very smart, Mewzer (?), he invents all kinds of stuff. Mewzer is one of those leader-lovers, but Daisy pays him to make something for her to escape the jail with and bring it to her. It works and one night, Daisy manages to escape, together with the other people that were locked up at that point. They make Mewzer come with them as well, but he isn't sure about it. The people that escaped are Daisy, Mewzer, one boy who is very mysterious and doesn't say anything (?), a cool guy (Logic), a cool girl (Maple), plus someone who looks like a Crow, and comes from "Fauna Town", a place where only animals live. --- I'm not gonna tell everything that happens from this point. After their escape, the main leaders from the school start their chase, and will follow them for pretty much the rest of the book. These parts will also be written. An important part is when one day, Mewzer decides to ditch the group, to help the leaders. He ties Daisy and friends up, and also places small transmitters in their clothes (they don't know that). Luckily, the mysterious boy (?) wasn't there at that point (he always leaves in the night to steal stuff, without the others knowing before), and when he came back he untied the group. Eventually at the end of the book, they get catched. Mewzer lands in a situation where he can choose if he shoots the leaders (which will give Daisy and co. extra time to get away), or shoot Daisy and company and become one of the main leaders of the school. This decision equals the decision if there will ever be a part 2. --- This of course, is not nearly everything. There are also dream sequences, when Daisy or another character has a dream, I describe it, the dream usually has something to do with recent happenings or the person's thoughts about something, visualized in poetic style. I know the story is really unclear the way I tell it now. But do you guys think it would be good enough, or have other ideas?
