g209 Posted January 28, 2011 Posted January 28, 2011 (edited) This is my map for zs,it's my 5th map in general and 1st made for zs so if you have any advice or consturctive criticism write it here.All things that may seem strange will get fixed soon.(Like random lolwut train)EDIT:Some places had strange light because i had flashlight on Edited January 28, 2011 by g209 Quote
g209 Posted January 28, 2011 Author Posted January 28, 2011 BUMP,also this map is very optimised and gives around 153 - 169 fps on highest(my PC) Quote
MrZunz Posted January 28, 2011 Posted January 28, 2011 A bump after 7 minutes? Get the fuck out... Quote
Mr. Darkness Posted January 28, 2011 Posted January 28, 2011 Uhm... zs_flatgrasshouse_optimised?Blocky, big, boring, ugly and empty...Just keep practicing. Better practice your design imagination first. try to work with entities later. Quote
Lipton Posted January 28, 2011 Posted January 28, 2011 Looks pretty boring and empty and i dont personally like dark maps...Just keep practicing doing those Zs maps Quote
Pufulet Posted January 28, 2011 Posted January 28, 2011 Too much space and emptiness, not enough tasty atmosphere and buidlings. No wonder you get high fps....WHats with the random WTF trains? D: Quote
Holy Posted January 28, 2011 Posted January 28, 2011 WHats with the random WTF trains? D:Modern art. Quote
Griffon Posted January 28, 2011 Posted January 28, 2011 (edited) WHats with the random WTF trains? D:Modern art.I like trains! Edited January 28, 2011 by Griffon Quote
g209 Posted January 28, 2011 Author Posted January 28, 2011 (edited) Train was going to be fixed but today skype screwed up my pc so i have to reinstall everything i had including steam games / vmfs and other stuff,so no to steam for atleast a day :/ Edited January 28, 2011 by g209 Quote
Damien Posted January 28, 2011 Posted January 28, 2011 I see potential in the map, its just a bit empty. Adding a few buildings or making the map smaller would make it alot better. Quote
Chikennugget1 Posted January 28, 2011 Posted January 28, 2011 Inb4boter's opinion.But it looks too empty and..noobish.Not in the wrong way but, you need to practice more. Quote
Pufulet Posted January 29, 2011 Posted January 29, 2011 (edited) I suggest you have a look at my map progression topics. They show my maps from early stages as i make the map. Not zs_glacier though since im still working on that Edited January 29, 2011 by Pufulet Quote
stalker-dude(nl) Posted January 29, 2011 Posted January 29, 2011 Some displacement maybe?Also if you make wide open spaces you should really put more stuff in it.As Lipton said: it looks pretty boring. Quote
Doubleedge Posted January 29, 2011 Posted January 29, 2011 Yeah it needs more detail, but you can keep working on it to make it better Quote
Mr. Darkness Posted January 29, 2011 Posted January 29, 2011 You should really learn how to use displacements tool... Quote
Bluddorn Posted January 30, 2011 Posted January 30, 2011 (edited) Maybe a midnight skybox will make the map more interesing,also adding a few tombstones will do the trick Edited January 30, 2011 by Bluddorn Quote
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