You may find other arguments-that's my opinion-because yours have been used a lot,a lot,a lot of time before,be original.The "law-man" thing is a bit stereotyped,and also you don't speak a lot(yes,I know you have some difficulties with english,but I mean,you don't seem to be a lot "opened",we don't know how you are in-game).Be nice with the others,try to be good etc...