Incoming contructive critisms! Piano line is good, it has a few mistakes in it though. The whispered vocals honestly sound exactly the same as Golum out of Lord Of The Rings, can't decide if that's a good or bad thing though. As others have said, you don't exactly have a singing voice, but if you're willing to attempt it, I'm sure you can improve it. The backing strings are very good. All in all, for a first song, it's very good.